The graph below provides information on the average cost of three kinds of cereals in England and Wales.

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The graph and table respectively illustrate the mean price for every ton of 3 cereals in England and Wales

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the volume of sales made over these edibles (gauged in tons) over the first eight months of 2014.

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, the three surveyed categories were, albeit at different degrees, on a downward trajectory.

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wheat

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cereal was deemed the most lucrative product out of the three. In detail, with almost 160 pounds,

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cereal started the survey as a somewhat deluxe commodity when its initial number outdistanced other contenders in the market by at least 20 pounds in January. Within the next 6 months, the cereal trio witnessed a commensurate trend when, despite

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at dissimilar levels, the general price for each type fluctuated in homogeneity.

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, the

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two months observed a transitory shift in the graph as oats experienced a major uptick to faintly overpriced

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before returning to the general trend. Apropos of the table,

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cereal registered as the most

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crop when it proclaimed supremacy and bespoke itself as the dominant cereal amongst other sections within the market.

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, the highest sale recorded was engendered by

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in March at about 163500. As regards oats, its figures varied widely between 600 at least and 3580 at most.

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The graph below provides information on the average cost of three kinds of cereals in England and Wales.

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