The graph below provides information on the average cost of three kinds of cereals in England and Wales.

The graph below provides information on the average cost of three kinds of cereals in England and Wales.
The graph and table respectively illustrate the mean price for every ton of 3 cereals in England and Wales
as well as
the volume of sales made over these edibles (gauged in tons) over the first eight months of 2014.
Overall
, the three surveyed categories were, albeit at different degrees, on a downward trajectory.
Additionally
,
wheat
cereal was deemed the most lucrative product out of the three. In detail, with almost 160 pounds,
wheat
cereal started the survey as a somewhat deluxe commodity when its initial number outdistanced other contenders in the market by at least 20 pounds in January. Within the next 6 months, the cereal trio witnessed a commensurate trend when, despite
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at dissimilar levels, the general price for each type fluctuated in homogeneity.
However
, the
last
two months observed a transitory shift in the graph as oats experienced a major uptick to faintly overpriced
wheat
before returning to the general trend. Apropos of the table,
wheat
cereal registered as the most
highly-sought-after
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crop when it proclaimed supremacy and bespoke itself as the dominant cereal amongst other sections within the market.
Moreover
, the highest sale recorded was engendered by
wheat
in March at about 163500. As regards oats, its figures varied widely between 600 at least and 3580 at most.
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