The pie charts show information about energy production in a country in two separate years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts show information about energy production in a country in two separate years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts compare the amount of
energy
produced in a specific country in 2 different years, 1995 and 2005.
Overall
, Coal production experienced the highest proportion in those 2 years,
while
nuclear
energy
in 2005 and the category labelled as other in 1995 ranked
last
.
To begin
, the figure for coal
energy
was the highest in 1995 and 2005, approximately 30
percent
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. The proportion of gas
energy
that have been produced in those 2 years, stood
second,
well under 30
percent
in 1995 and well over 30
percent
in 2005. Petro production accounted for just over 29
percent
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in the year
of
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1995.
By contrast
the figure for petro
energy
in 2005 was lower at nearly 19.5
percent
. The proportion of nuclear
energy
in 2005 was higher at just over 10 %
by comparison
. The remaining amount of
energy
was approximately 5 in 1995,
whereas
in 2005 it saw a percentage of nearly 10
percent
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, percent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
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