58.The diagram presents the process of recycling glass bottles. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

58.The diagram presents the process of recycling glass bottles. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
IELTS Writing Task Chart for 58.The diagram presents the process of recycling glass bottles. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The graphic illustrates the steps of recycling
glass
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bottles
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, is a 3-stage 9-step, man-made and cycle process, beginning with
glass
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usage of
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bottles
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and ending with transporting them to supermarkets. First of all, in the first stage, individuals will throw the used
glass
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bottles
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in a specific collecting point, which a big truck will pass through and transport all the
bottles
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every certain time, in the second stage, the collected
glass
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bottles
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are cleaned with high-pressure water, so there is no rest in the bottle. After the
bottles
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are cleaned, they are separated into three different stages, which are the clear, green and brown process, the aim is to recycle the
bottles
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in the correct places.
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, all
bottles
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are furnaced, so are recycled and converted into new liquid
glass
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,
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liquid is poured into a mould, so they have the shape of a bottle, and
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, in the final stage, the recycled
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bottles
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are packaged and sent to supermarkets, so the customer has access to them, and the cycle begins again.

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