61.The table and pie show the total value and sources of fish imports to the UK from 1990 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

61.The table and pie show the total value and sources of fish imports to the UK from 1990 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The table and pie chart
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the total
value
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and the place where the
fish
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were imported to the United Kingdom between 1990 and 2000.
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, the total
value
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of
fish
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increased over the
years
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.
Fish
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imported from Canada decreased during the period
while
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the ones from
Japan
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increased. The total
value
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of
fish
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rose during the entire period of time, where 1990, there was a
value
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of 6.5
billion
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pounds
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, and
this
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grew steadily by around 0.5
billion
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in the next five
years
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to 7.05
billion
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pounds
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in 1995,
while
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in the
last
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five
years
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, it jumped sharply in approximately 3.5
billion
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pounds
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to 10.5
billion
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pounds
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in the
last
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year. In 1990, only one-sixth of the
fish
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came from
Japan
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,
while
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the
fish
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came from Canada and other countries had the same
proportion
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, which was approximately two-fifths each . In the next five
years
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, the portion occupied by
Japan
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decreased to just over one-eighth,
while
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Canada occupied one-third and other countries had the largest
proportion
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with more than a half. In the
last
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year,
while
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Canada’s
proportion
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reduced to around one-fifth, the amount imported from
Japan
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increased to approximately one-
third,
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and the largest
proportion
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was from other countries, which occupied around 45%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words value, fish, years, japan, billion, pounds, proportion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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