61.The table and pie show the total value and sources of fish imports to the UK from 1990 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

61.The table and pie show the total value and sources of fish imports to the UK from 1990 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The table and pie chart
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the total
value
and the place where the
fish
were imported to the United Kingdom between 1990 and 2000.
Overall
, the total
value
of
fish
increased over the
years
.
Fish
imported from Canada decreased during the period
while
the ones from
Japan
increased. The total
value
of
fish
rose during the entire period of time, where 1990, there was a
value
of 6.5
billion
pounds
, and
this
grew steadily by around 0.5
billion
in the next five
years
to 7.05
billion
pounds
in 1995,
while
in the
last
five
years
, it jumped sharply in approximately 3.5
billion
pounds
to 10.5
billion
pounds
in the
last
year. In 1990, only one-sixth of the
fish
came from
Japan
,
while
the
fish
came from Canada and other countries had the same
proportion
, which was approximately two-fifths each . In the next five
years
, the portion occupied by
Japan
decreased to just over one-eighth,
while
Canada occupied one-third and other countries had the largest
proportion
with more than a half. In the
last
year,
while
Canada’s
proportion
reduced to around one-fifth, the amount imported from
Japan
increased to approximately one-
third,
and the largest
proportion
was from other countries, which occupied around 45%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words value, fish, years, japan, billion, pounds, proportion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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