65.The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

65.The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The pie chart illustrates the destination of Anthropology
students
after graduating from one university,
while
the table shows the salaries of these
students
after 5 years of work.
Overall
, most of the
students
found a full-time
job
,
while
there is
also
a small
proportion
of
people
that are studying postgraduate and doing a part-time
job
.
Also
,
people
working in the government sector, have the highest salaries. More than half of
students
found full-time work, specifically, 52%, having the largest
proportion
. Followed by those who have a part-time
job
, with only 15% of the
overall
share, which is 3% higher than those who are unemployed, with 12%.
Furthermore
, individuals who are studying postgraduate and have a full-time
job
, occupy 8% of the total share,
whereas
it is the same
proportion
of those
students
who do not know what they are doing, the
students
doing part-time jobs and studying postgraduate, have the lowest
proportion
, with only 5%. Individuals after working 5 years, 40% of those who work as freelance consultants have a
salary
between $75,000- $99,000 and the other 40% have a
salary
of $100,000 or more. 5% of
people
working in freelance consultants and the government sector have a
salary
of $25,000 to $49,999 and 15% of
people
working in these sectors have a
salary
of $50,000 to $74,999,
while
50% of
people
who have a
job
in the government sector has a
salary
of more than $100,000
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