The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graph illustrates the changed amount over the years between 1970 and 2040 in four different
countries
of Asia. Overall
, it appears that almost all the states given are facing an upward trend throughout the period given. In addition
, the amount of population
in Malaysia
outnumbered other countries
by until 2020 and is predicted to continuously grow to become the biggest rate
of population
amongst
all.
In 1970, Change preposition
apply
Malaysia
and Philippines
almost had similar citizen rates, around 30%. In the following year, Correct article usage
the Philippines
Malaysia
got
increased by 10% in Verb problem
apply
population
rate
. As opposed to the Philipines
which only slightly rose to around below1%. In 1990, Philippines
began to step over Correct article usage
the Philippines
Malaysia
and its rate
of the
Correct article usage
apply
population
was almost half of the prior decade, before continuously falling until 2010 to almost 40%, but started to regain in the next 10 years by 5%, rose to 45%. It is predicted to grow in 2030 until the end of the period given and reached its peak above 60%. As opposed to Malaysia
, which is not as fluctuate as Philipines
. It may be surpassed by Philipines
in 1990, Correct article usage
the Philipines
however
, its population
rate
continuously
to rapidly grow and is expected to reach a remarkable Replace the word
continues
rate
of people in 2040, which is above 80%.
On the other hand
, Thailand and Indonesia which are the remaining countries
due to
their population
in the period given are only below 20%. Even though in the following years, these two countries
faced an upward trend, between 1990 and 2020, the rate
population
of Thailand remained the same which was about 30%. Meanwhile, Indonesia's population
continues
to grow and suppressed two other Wrong verb form
continued
countries
between 2000 and 2010 which are Thailand (above 20%) and Philipines
(above 40%) atau (above 20% and above 40% respectively). Indonesia's Correct article usage
the Philipines
rate
of population
has an indication of progress from 2030 until 2040 around 60%.Submitted by baitynuris191 on
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