Every one of us should become a vegeterian because eating meat can cause serious health problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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vegetarian
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health
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meats
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dietetics
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proteins
However
, most of the protein contains in meats
so we can not avoid meats
and it will prevent from
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health
problems such
as blood sugar and cholestrol
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cholesterol
On the other hand
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meat
habits will be more dangerous in the future.
In conclusion, eating meat
is not a cause
to
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health
issues but the way we eat meat
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affect
for
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health
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meat
and sausages. Therefore
we want to avoid those type
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types
meat
but not other meats
. Becasue
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Because
meats
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a lot of benefits to our Change the verb form
contain
health
. But some people
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beliefs
meat
, those people
try to be vegetarian. So, I do not agree everyone want
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wants
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vegetarian
due to
having meat
cause
to physical health
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