Every one of us should become a vegeterian because eating meat can cause serious health problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many
people
in the modern world consider their meal pattern than before
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take
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balance
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diet,
it
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will help
to
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them to
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have a healthy life. So, all of us want to be
vegiterian
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vegetarian
due to
meat
will be a
cause
to
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health
issues. I
totaly
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totally
disagree with
this
statement and in
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I will
eleminate
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eliminate
the major reasons for that. Mainly, we want to learn what kind of
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nutrition
nutritions
contain
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the
meat
this
will help us to decide our eating
habit
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. Most
of
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the
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red
meat
contains proteins and fish contains calcium. If we avoid
this
meat
it will
be
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a
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cuase
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cause
case
to unbalance
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meal
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and more
health
issues.
For example
, most
of
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the
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people
trend
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tend
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to consume junk food
such
as pasta,
buns
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and buns
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with
lot
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of
carbohydrate
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carbohydrates
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but you can replace
this carbohydrate
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these carbohydrates
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with
meats
and it will not
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your taste and nutrition levels. Most of
dietetions
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dietetics
dietitians
advice to take more
protiens
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proteins
.
However
, most of the protein contains in
meats
so we can not avoid
meats
and it will prevent
from
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a lot of
health
problems
such
as blood sugar and
cholestrol
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cholesterol
.
On the other hand
, some
meat
products
not
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healthy,
those
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products
cause
to
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serious
health
problems
such
as cancer and cholesterol.
Specially
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, most
of
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children are addicted to
have
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junk food like
,
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hot dogs. These kinds of unhealthy
meat
habits will be more dangerous in the future. In conclusion, eating
meat
is not a
cause
to
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health
issues but the way we eat
meat
will
effect
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affect
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for
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health
such
as
process
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meat
and sausages.
Therefore
we want to avoid those
type
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types
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of
meat
but not other
meats
.
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Because
meats
contains
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a lot of benefits to our
health
. But some
people
have their personal
beleifs
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beliefs
about eating
meat
, those
people
try to be vegetarian. So, I do not agree everyone
want
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to be
vegeterian
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vegetarian
due to
having
meat
cause
to physical
health
.
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