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You have bought some clothing online and are not satisfied with your purchase. Write a letter to the company that you bought the clothing from. In your email -give details of the purchase -describe the problem -explain why you need a replacement urgently

#purchase #company #email #-give #-describe #-explain #replacement
Dear sir: I would like to bring your attention
on
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issues
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 that I
have
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faced when I purchased from your online
company
last
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Before two
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Two
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 days ago,I
have
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bought some attire From your
company
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company's
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online website.I chose The cash payment
in
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the the delivery since my credit card has expired .So The
company
was obligate
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 me to pay extra faeces on the cash payment which it does not mention
in
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 The website or even notify me before ordering .
In addition
, I have faced a problem is
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delay
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 delivery which of the items were delivered after two days of specific appointments. And issues like these are not acceptable at all and have a negative impact on the
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company's
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company
 reputation.
Therefore
, I would refund
my
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 purchase as soon as possible because your extra fees have
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 me in astrich condition. Looking forward to
urgent
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your urgent
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 response. Yours faithfully.
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task response
Provide specific details of the purchase and the problem to fully address the task requirements.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure that the letter is organized with clear paragraphs and includes an appropriate greeting and closing.
lexical resource
Expand your range of vocabulary and use more appropriate and precise words to express your ideas effectively.
grammatical range
Pay attention to sentence structure and use a wider variety of grammatical structures.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Dear Sir/Madam
  • I am writing to inform you about a recent purchase I made from your company
  • I am disappointed with the quality/fitting of the clothing
  • The fabric/material used is substandard/defective
  • The color/design does not match the product description
  • The size is incorrect, and it does not fit me properly
  • I urgently require a replacement as I have an upcoming event/function
  • I would appreciate it if you could expedite the process
  • I expect a prompt response and resolution to this matter
  • I suggest a refund or replacement of the item
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