The bar graph shows the number of man and woman participants in the olympics between 1924 to 2012
The charts illustrate how many
male
and Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
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females
participates
in the Olympic Games between 1924 and 2012. Change the verb form
participate
Overall
, the number of people participating in the Olympic
generally increased and the majority of Fix the agreement mistake
Olympics
participants
in each year was
men.
In 1924, more than 3000 people participated in the Change the verb form
were
Olympic
and the Fix the agreement mistake
Olympics
participants
was
dominated by men with 3000 Change the verb form
were
participants
, while
only around 100 women participated. The number of participants
increased in 1952 to around 5000 participants
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Vocabulary: Replace the words participants with synonyms.
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