The diagram shows the procedure for university entry for high school graduates. Write a report for a university or college lecturer describing the information.

The diagram shows the procedure for university entry for high school graduates. Write a report for a university or college lecturer describing the information.
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The flow chart shows how high
school
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graduates join
university
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.
It is clear that
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there are many distinct stages from obtaining a high
school
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degree to joining the desired
university
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. To commence with the first step; the
student
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should complete an application form downloaded from the website after obtaining the high
school
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degree.
The next step is
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to send the application to the admin. After sending; the admin may reject the request, if that happens, the
student
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might either complete an application for an alternative course or cancel the requestion form. Another probability, the
university
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administration might accept enrolment after two weeks,
then
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the
student
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should select the subject and register with the dean and
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afterwards
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enter the
university
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. The administration
also
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might need more documents, in
this
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situation the
student
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should compile all the documents required and send them again to the admin and
this
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step takes about two weeks from sending the form of joining the
university
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the
student
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chooses after holding a high
school
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degree.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words school, university, student with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • procedure
  • university entry
  • high school graduates
  • application process
  • admission requirements
  • selection criteria
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