Some people say that zoos have no useful purpose. Others believe that zoos are beneficial in many ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A number of

people

believe that there is no potential benefit that can be received from

zoos

, whilst others consider that

zoos

have numerous

vantages

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advantages

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.

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essay discusses

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virtue

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virtues

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and

drawback

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of the existence of

zoos

. Personally,

i

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see eye to eye with the idea that

states

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zoos

is

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are

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advantagous

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advantageous

. One of

advantages

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the advantages

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from

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zoos

is giving knowledge for educational purposes

especially

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, especially

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for

childrens

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children

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. Information about the variety of

animals

in the world especially the wild ones can be seen directly in the zoo.

Therefore

,

attendances

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is

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makes it

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possible to learn and deep dive

in

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into

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the insightful knowledge from the

animals

in

scope

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the scope

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of either their own personal traits or their surroundings.

For instance

, some elementary school in Indonesia is conducting an outdoor study program in

zoo

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a zoo

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in order to provide extensive knowledge about various animal

behaviors

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behaviours

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after the learning process in the classroom.

However

, there are

also

negative

viewpoint

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viewpoints

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about

zoos

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existency

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existence

.

People

believing in

this

point of view consider that

zoos

just

make

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put

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the

animals

 in

the

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apply

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stressful

condition

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conditions

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and

animals

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that animals

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should not be

imprisonment

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. 

Besides

that, they

also

disagree about the educational benefit

from

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zoos

because pupils could

possible

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possibly

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to

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apply

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study

about

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apply

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animals

from the widespread information,

for example

, the educational videos that were already spread throughout the internet. In a nutshell, there are different opinions

regard to

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regarding

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the possible

beneficial

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benefits

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from

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of

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zoos

.

People

having

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pros arguments say that there is an educational benefit from

zoos

, whilst the cons

people

believe that

zoos

just

give

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have

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negative effects

to

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on

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animals

. As far as I am concerned, I am on the same wavelength with those pros

people

.

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, if I were the

authorities

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,

i

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would legislate the law in the obligation

of treating

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to treat

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