An increasing number of people are choosing to have cosmetic surgery in order to improve their appearance. Why are more people choosing to have operation to change the way they look? Do you think this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, a vast majority of
people
want to change and enhance their fairness
by
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through
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cosmetic
surgery
. One of the main
reason
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reasons
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is that
people
want to be attractive and beautiful and it can negatively
impacted
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impact
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on
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their health . One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that
people
want to change their
appearance
by cosmetic
surgery
due to
the fact that it
make
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makes
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their faces attractive and beautiful.
Therefore
, in today's world some
people
hate them's who have ugly
face
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faces
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and to prevent it most
of
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apply
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people
decide to improve their
appearance
.
For instance
, if they
will
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improve their faces by cosmetic
surgery
, they might increase their career progression. A primary example of
this
Angelina
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is Angelina
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Joley,
which
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who
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received
bulling
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bullying
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before improving
appearance
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their appearance
her appearance
his appearance
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by
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through
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cosmetic
surgery
, after that she became famous and
earnt
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earned
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a lot of money.
Consequently
, over half
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population of the world
decide
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decided
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to alter their faces by Angelina Joleys method. One of the main aspects of the problem that
public
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the public
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prefer
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prefers
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amend
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to amend
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their faces
by
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with
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cosmetic
surgery
is that it can badly
affected
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affect
be affected
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on
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apply
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their health
as
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cosmetic
surgery
remains
very
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the very
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dangerous type of
surgery
because
instead
of
make
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making
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people
's
apperance
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appearance
better it can make it
worser
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worse
.
Furhermore
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Furthermore
, many doctors do not
reccomend
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recommend
these
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this
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type of
surgery
for all
people
because it
is not study
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fully.
For example
, if
people
will
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decide to improve their
appearance
, they can lose their type of body. Recent research found that approximately 64
percentage
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of
people
who altered their faces
as a result
losed
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their noses because of doctors
which
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who
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were not prepared for
this
surgery
. In conclusion, even
cosmetic
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though cosmetic
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surgery
still
remaining
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remains
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popular and it improve
fairness
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the fairness
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of
people
it can seriously
affected
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affect
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on
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apply
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their health.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Idealized beauty standards
  • Cosmetic surgery
  • Advancements in medical technology
  • Socially acceptable
  • Self-improvement
  • Psychological well-being
  • Competitive workforce
  • Youthful appearance
  • Body dysmorphic disorder (BDD)
  • Physical appearance
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