In some countries, younger people are neglecting their right to vote. What problems does this cause and what are some of the possible solutions?

In some parts of the world, the fact that young

people

are reluctant to vote in an election is still becoming an issue. I believe, there are many reasons that might lead to

this

problem

, but the solutions

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to be

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over to the government and the

individuals

in each

countries

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. The first cause that might be

a

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reason why

this

problem

exists is

the

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politicians have bad track records. Indonesia can

examplifies

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examine

this

phenomenon, where some politicians had done the

coruption

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corruption

in many

institution

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institutions

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such

as education.

This

has made the citizens unsure and

untrust

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to

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them

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.

As a result

, they are unwilling to use their rights to vote since they

regard

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it will not affect anything for

the

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future

of

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theirs

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. The second reason is the

candidats’

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candidates’

mission

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are often subtle and unrealistic which can be seen in their campaigns. The

individuals

reluctantly consider them in the election. These causes

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proven that the politicians’ behaviour

are

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essential to be

assesed

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assessed

.

However

, there are two possible solutions to overcome

this

problem

.

Firstly

, The governments, in their period have to punish the politicians who did the

coruption

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corruption

. It will determine the quality of

people

who have responsibility for a country in terms of running every

programs

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in the next period.

Secondly

, the

individuals

, particularly young

people

of each country should have an awareness of the importance of the candidates’ track records by digging information more and more. They have to utilize the advancement of technology to look for it. In conclusion, even though

this

problem

is still becoming

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issue, by analysing the causes, it still can be tackled not only by the governments but

also

by the

individuals

especially

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the young

people

in many countries in the world.