Many people think that to become a successful specialist and never change it later . Agree or disagree ?

People have divergent opinions about

become

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becoming

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a prosperous specialist preferable to select a vacation in early

life

and

don't

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not

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alter it later .

Although

, I

beleive

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believe

it's a controversial objective and I will explain

in

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it in

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this

essay . Undeniably,

for

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those who

in

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an

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advance decision to select a profession can achieve their goals easily . Obviously , it is a long

time

process so it would be better to think about it early stage that can help individuals to

great

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apply

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determine their walks of

life

.

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, someone who wants to be a doctor in future for

this

they have to prepare for

in

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this

time

. They have

settle

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settled

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up to relate

this

subject in study and

also

ready up mentally and make more determination of advancements can help the individuals to set a goal to achieve and become more energetic

also

lead to a positive impact on

life

.

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,

this

way does not

works

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it

vary

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varies

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in the situation . After a certain period of

time

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time,

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it might be

change

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changed

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or someone can not afford to continue .

Another reasons

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would be after a

time

their mind would

be divert

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thus

lead

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leading

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to

make

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making

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an alternative profession .

For instance

, anyone who wants

government

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a government

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job in future but

some times

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sometimes

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they

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apply

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get more opportunities better than

this occupations

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this occupation

these occupations

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such

as individuals

get

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who get

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a chance to go abroad for higher study

this

time

they switch

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to on

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on

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an

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alternative or after a

while

they can't afford

cost

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the cost

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or may be unable to bear fretted pressure .

As well

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, after a certain

age

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age,

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they like another profession that able to lead

luxurious

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a luxurious

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life

. In conclusion . Though early preparation for

job

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a job

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is effective and gives a lot of benefits to achieve a

desire

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desired

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goals

but

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sometime

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sometimes

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does not work because of so many

situation

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situations

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and

also

divert their mind after a

while

.