In many countries, people do not recycle waste materials, such as paper, glass, and cans. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve this problem?

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Nowadays, some countries have an opportunity to

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produced by human activity.

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, there are still many

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countries which are not doing it. There are several reasons for

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, it is economic development. Only several countries in modern days can afford full recycling or recycling of essentials

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to deliver all collected

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points.

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, community engagement and social advertising to encourage people to participate in it.

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bins.

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, but not least are investments to build recycling factories with modern

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society. To solve

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issue of

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recycling, governments should implement comprehensive recycling education programs, emphasizing the environmental benefits and long-term consequences of neglecting

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disposal. Offering incentives,

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as tax breaks or reduced

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management fees, can motivate individuals and businesses to participate actively in recycling initiatives. Simultaneously, establishing accessible recycling

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in communities and enforcing strict

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disposal regulations can streamline the recycling process. By combining

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educational efforts, incentives, and infrastructure development, societies can foster a culture of responsible

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management, ultimately reducing the environmental impact of unrecycled materials.

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, the recycling issue can be solved by

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collaboration of local and

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authorities with entrepreneurs. Government should subsidise

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In many countries, people do not recycle waste materials, such as paper, glass, and cans. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve this problem?

Fully explain your ideas

Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skill. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that professional workers such as doctors, nurses and teachers who make a greater contribution to society should be paid more than sports athletes and entertainment stars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

some people think it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on public transport systems such as railways and trams. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that increasing tax on various industries will reduce pollution whereas others believe that there are better ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.