Many parents today organise extra classes for their children after school and at the weekends. Do you feel that this is a worthwhile thing to do or you feel children have enough education at school?

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classes
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. Many parents think that education in the
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not enough, and they consider that extra courses give their children more knowledge. In my point of view, teaching in schools
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enough, if children fully understand
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. There some kids had a hard time absorbing information or maybe they weren’t comfortable studying at
school
because they would be distracted,
for example
, by friends.
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child
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to explain the topic in other ways.
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educational point of view, some programs, like art or music do not organize well in schools since institutions’ deans mostly prefer to allocate money to important subjects like science or mathematics.
On the other hand
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extra classes put more pressure
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children`s shoulders since they cannot focus well on their homework after
school
and sometimes they burn midnight oils to meet the deadlines.
In addition
, their progress at
school
will be decreased, and it leads to moral burning.
Last
but not least, free time after
school
can be perfectly used for different activities,
such
as socializing with other youngsters, participating in team sports or hanging out with their friends which
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them turn into better grownups.
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it will be good to
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some skills like debating or acting. Having
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everything mentioned up, we can come to
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conclusion that it is not acceptable that parents push their children to take more classes because students are not in a competition. Every child has a right to take up new hobbies after
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socialize.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • reinforce learning
  • personalized attention
  • student-to-teacher ratios
  • comprehensive coverage
  • academic and non-academic subjects
  • well-rounded development
  • address specific weaknesses
  • grade improvement
  • performance in exams
  • leisure time
  • burnout
  • educational opportunities
  • socio-economic disparity
  • over-scheduling
  • balanced approach
  • after-school programs
  • weekend tutoring
  • additional practice
  • constructive criticism
  • holistic growth
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