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The bar chart below shows Scotland’s exports to the rest of the UK and the rest of the world for the year 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where necessary.

The bar chart below shows Scotland’s exports to the rest of the UK and the rest of the world for the year 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where necessary.
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The chart provides information about Scotland`s
exports
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 to the
in
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different areas of
industry
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 to the
Rest
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 of the
UK
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 with its
exports
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 to the
rest
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 of the
world
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 in 2014.
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, we can that
exports
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 to the
rest
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 of the
world
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 were much more significant to the Scottish economy than those to the
rest
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 of the
UK
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. The bar chart illustrates that in 2014 Scotland exported more to the
rest
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 of the
world
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 than to the
rest
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 of the
UK
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 in all industries mentioned with one exception. The Electrical and instrument Engineering
industry
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exports
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 were 4
billion
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 to
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rest
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the rest
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 of the
UK
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 compared to 2.3
billion
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 going to the
rest
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 of the
world
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. Other industries
much
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more
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lower than Business Services and Finance, Hotels and Restaurant Services . Because
of
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,
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industry
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 is the
most higher
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highest
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 than others it counts 13.8
billion
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on
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 2014
Rest
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 of the
world
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. In comparison with
others
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 there is one notable
industry
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 is Wholesale and Retail with roughly 7
billion
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of
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difference between
exports
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 of ROW, and
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rest
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the rest
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 of the
UK
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.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words exports, industry, rest, uk, world, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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