The bar chart below shows Scotland’s exports to the rest of the UK and the rest of the world for the year 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where necessary.
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exports
to the in
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industry
to the Rest
of the UK
with its exports
to the rest
of the world
in 2014.
Overall
, we can that exports
to the rest
of the world
were much more significant to the Scottish economy than those to the rest
of the UK
.
The bar chart illustrates that in 2014 Scotland exported more to the rest
of the world
than to the rest
of the UK
in all industries mentioned with one exception. The Electrical and instrument Engineering industry
exports
were 4 billion
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the rest
UK
compared to 2.3 billion
going to the rest
of the world
.
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