The bar chart below shows Scotland’s exports to the rest of the UK and the rest of the world for the year 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where necessary.

The bar chart below shows Scotland’s exports to the rest of the UK and the rest of the world for the year 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where necessary.
The chart provides information about Scotland`s
exports
to the
in
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different areas of
industry
to the
Rest
of the
UK
with its
exports
to the
rest
of the
world
in 2014.
Overall
, we can that
exports
to the
rest
of the
world
were much more significant to the Scottish economy than those to the
rest
of the
UK
. The bar chart illustrates that in 2014 Scotland exported more to the
rest
of the
world
than to the
rest
of the
UK
in all industries mentioned with one exception. The Electrical and instrument Engineering
industry
exports
were 4
billion
to
rest
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the rest
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of the
UK
compared to 2.3
billion
going to the
rest
of the
world
. Other industries
much
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more
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lower than Business Services and Finance, Hotels and Restaurant Services . Because
of
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,
this
industry
is the
most higher
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than others it counts 13.8
billion
on
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2014
Rest
of the
world
. In comparison with
others
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there is one notable
industry
is Wholesale and Retail with roughly 7
billion
of
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difference between
exports
of ROW, and
rest
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the rest
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of the
UK
.
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