IELTS writing test 2 Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves? You should write at least 250 words. Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and with relevant evidence.

Each

country

has different

resources

one and

another

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, both its natural

resources

and its human

resources

.

Thus

bring

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brings

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up

a

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apply

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different results whether

country’s

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a country’s

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economic

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economy

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is developed or not.

Countries

with good industry and qualified human

resource

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resources

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will be the established

countries

,

while

countries

with not enough industry and

resources

will be poorer

country

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countries

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than

other

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others

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. Wealthy states should not

being

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be

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a

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apply

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responsible to poorer

countries

in providing basic necessities or education because each

country

has its own political policies and rich

countries

can’t interfere too much in other

countries

’ affairs. Poorer nations have full control in feeding their inhabitants and being responsible for educational needs. They have a big role in seeking the welfare of their people.

However

, the world social order has recently increasingly prioritized social justice including in terms of education and

wealth

management. And by that reason, equality must be sought to be achieved.

Wealth

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countries

can help

lightening

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lighten

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the burden on poorer

countries

. Some efforts that

wealth

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wealthy

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nations can offer are: giving

the

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apply

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scholarship

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scholarships

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to poorer

nation’s

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nations’

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citizens so that their human

resources

experienced

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experience

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an increase in quality

by

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through

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transfer

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the transfer

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of knowledge from

wealth

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wealthy

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countries

. Another way is by providing

food

aids

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aid

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to

fulfill

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fulfil

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food

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the food

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needs of poorer

countries

. Progress in the agricultural sector is

also

very important considering that agriculture is the main source of

food

.

For

this

reason,

may

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many

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competent

food

experts are needed to build the basic foundations of

food

security. On the other side, other sectors must be taken care of too to

encouraged

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encourage

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poorer nations to be able to advance the

country

and can release from poverty.