The graph below shows waste recycling rates in the U.S. from 1960 to 2011.

The graph below shows waste recycling rates in the U.S. from 1960 to 2011.
The lower curve depicts the amount of
waste
recycling in the U.S. during the period between 1960 and 2011. In general, it can be
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clearly
seen, that the rates of
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waste
recovery rose gradually, but after
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year the figure climbed sharply and
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the trend
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was upward until 2011. We can see from the data that during the period between 1960 and
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there
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gradual
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waste
recovery. The figures fluctuated between 6.4 per
cent
and ten point four per
cent
(5.6-16.7 million tons) respectively.
However
, in 1985 the total
waste
recovery increased significantly from 16.7 to 33.2 million tons, which is almost two times.
Furthermore
, the trend was upward and in 1995 the percentage of recycling uplift dramatically from sixteen per
cent
to 25.7 per
cent
.
Moreover
, the national recycling rates remained the same an upward trend until 2011. In conclusion, it could be noticed that between 1960 and 2011 the proportion of recycling increased enormously from 6.4 per
cent
to 34.7 per
cent
(5.6 to 86.9 million tons).
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • waste recycling
  • rates
  • trend
  • significance
  • factors
  • comparison
  • decades
  • implications
  • future
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