Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To What extent do young think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
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is Correct your spelling
Rubbish
one
of the biggest environmental issues across the globe. Some people
argue that their
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they
recycled
only a little of Wrong verb form
recycle
home
waste
. They believe that recycling regulation
from governments are the only way to improve Fix the agreement mistake
regulations
this
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waste
management. In my opinion
a strict law should combined with a massive socialisation about recycling would be an effective way to engage more Add a comma
opinion,
people
to do
recycle.
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had
been proven as Wrong verb form
have
one
of the key drives of behavioural changes in the community. Recycling law should include in detail about
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also
the punishments. For instance
, for thousands Change preposition
of year
year
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years
this
regulation has been established in develop
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developed
countries
in Australia and Europe. The citizens are responsible for home
waste
recycle
and it is reported that the tight Wrong verb form
recycling
laws
trigger them to follow the rules. It is indeed that people
are afraid and reluctant of
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to
charge
with high fines when they are not recycling their Wrong verb form
charged
home
waste
. This
behaviour has been developed and pass
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passed
the
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and other generations which successfully drive
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drives
home
waste
recycle
improvement.
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recycling
Additionally
, when it comes to a new recycling law, it could not be successful without the massive socializations
. In order to implement a new habit Fix the agreement mistake
socialization
to
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the
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especially
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, especially
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. For examples
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countries
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country
home
waste
material are
done by only some part of the community. Even though there are Change the verb form
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laws
regarding the
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home
waste
management, socializations
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socialization
are
still lacking and the low control Correct subject-verb agreement
is
hinder
the implementation. Correct subject-verb agreement
hinders
Therefore
, the government should revise and reanalyse these laws
so they can be effective as in develop
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countries
. They should consider again about tight rules and punishment to improve changes in
the community level.
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conclusions
, Fix the agreement mistake
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government
should take Add an article
the government
home
waste
recycling regulation into account. The more straight forward
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straightforward
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socialization
it
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improve
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encourage
people
to do more recycling in the future.Submitted by ambercampbell.xx25 on
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