The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map depicts sports facilities in the university from 1990 and now.

Overall

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, it is noticeable that universities have become modernized and urbanized.

However

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, in the past, it was old and did not have more facilities.

To begin

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with, a park which is placed on the west side of the map has been replaced by a basketball street and more people started to go there. In terms of a tennis court, it has been built

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of the car park which is situated behind the tennis street. Another striking change is that borders have been constructed and protected all facilities on the east-south of the university. With regards to an outdoor pool, it has been transformed into an indoor pool. A notable change was in the changing room, it has been changed position opposite to the indoor pool and near to the fitness centre.

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, the second tennis court which was placed on the south side of the university has been knocked down and a fitness centre has been introduced.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

169 words

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