The bar chart given information the percentage of the survey results the reason adults choose to study at university while the given pie graph illustrates how adults spend should be shared.

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gives

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information

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about the

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percentage of the survey results

the

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and the

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reason

adults

choose to study at university

while

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pie graph illustrates how

adults

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adults'

adult's

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spend

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should be shared.

Overall

, more

adults

decide to study because they are interested in certain subjects at their school,

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, most of

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society is of the opinion that the cost of education should be borne by the individual.

To begin

with, throughout the period shown, 40% of

adults

decided to go to school because of interest in subjects at their school,

while

the next

popular

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most popular

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reasons were getting a qualification (38%) and being useful for a current job (22%). Increasing the prospect of promotion and enjoying learning/studying have the same proportion of about 20%. A small number of

adults

can get job opportunities around 12% and a minority are able to meet people as much as 9%. Almost half of

adults

bear the costs of Individual Education (40%). The number of

adults

who bear the costs with the employer is 35% and the

least

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lowest

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percentage is the taxpayer (25%).