People’s shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than any other factors. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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this

day and

age

,

people

are exposed to consumptive behaviours. The

age

group

was consider

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to

became

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the most prominent

factor

affecting

habits

on shopping. I slightly disagree with

this

view and

this

essay will explain why other factors were

also

significant

reflecting

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in reflecting

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the

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apply

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shopping

habits

. Regarding

to

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the topic, the

age

group

does

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is

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not always in line with

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people

’s shopping

need

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needs

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.

People

believe that certain

group

of

age

are

having

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have

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more needs and wants.

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,

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teenagers may have fewer needs and spending

rather

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than adult

people

. But when

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adults

getting

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older (>50 years old), they

are tend

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tend

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to reduce their spending

habits

.

This

phenomenon shows that there are

another

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other factors

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factor

that may affect

people

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people's

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habits

in shopping,

hence

age

group

is not the main variable.

Furthermore

, there are two other primary reasons that significantly improve

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buying

habits

, which are income and gender.

Firstly

, the greater the income, the greater

person’s

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a person’s

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needs and expenditures.

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, a

high salary

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high-salary

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person will have a high level of

life style

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lifestyle

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,

while

the

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lower

middle income

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class

people

will have limited flexibility to shop in their daily life. As for gender

factor

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factors

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, we would generally

percept

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perceive

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women and men are different in shopping desires. Women are likely to buy trendy fashion or recent beauty products,

while

men tend to purchase cutting-edge technology-related products.

Therefore

,

these evidences

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this evidence

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prove

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proves

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that

person’s

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a person’s

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earnings and sex aspect are other relevant variables

affect

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that affect

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people

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people's

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buying

habits

. In summary, there are many factors considered to influence shopping

habit

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habits

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,

such

as economic

factor

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factors

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and gender

aspect

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aspects

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,

while

the

age

group

is not the only

factor

that affects shopping behaviours.