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The chart below gives the percentage of social media users by age in Jamestown in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The chart below gives the percentage of social media users by age in Jamestown in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
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The pie chart illustrates the information of different age groups utilizing the internet in Jamestown in the year 2018.
Overall
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, youngsters were used the biggest part of the percentage, which accounted for nearly half of the chart.
Whereas
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, the least usage of internet was from the old aged
people
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.
To begin
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 with, kids aged from 13 to 25 were made use of the social media about 40 % in 2018. Which is high among other age groups. About 35% of
people
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 who are about 26- 35 utilized
such
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 websites in Jamestown. Both these were the highest percentage in the chart.
In contrast
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, middle-aged to senior citizen humans were little amount of
people
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 used the websites
such
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 as Facebook, Instagram, Twitter and so on. 18% of middle-aged
people
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 made use of the internet.
Then
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, individuals over 45 were only 10% and old age was put into use by 2%. The
last
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 three aged group
people
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 together accounted for less than half of the percentage.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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