The charts below show that percentage of their daily intake of various nutrients the average person in the USA consumes in each meal and in snacks. These nutrients may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarie the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Overall
, dinner proves to be a meal that is
composed of sodium
and saturated fat the most, while
added sugar
is mostly in snacks.
For morning dishes, it is evident that it
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really little unhealthy nutrition, with only 14% Correct subject-verb agreement
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sodium
and 16% of
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sugar
. In
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noon, American citizens are observed to consume those unhealthy nutrients more, as shown by the pie charts that lunch food is composed of nearly one-third of Correct article usage
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sodium
, a quarter of saturated fat, and 19% of added sugar
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In the evening, sodium
and saturated fat seem to be both main
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the percentage of added sugar
in those dishes accounted for just 23%. Among all of the meals, snacks stand out as they contain a high amount of added sugar
, which constitutes 42%; however
, snacks contain only 14% of
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sodium
and about one-fifth of saturated fat.Submitted by mena201205 on
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