The line graph below shows the changes in the rate of sales of Gold in Dubai in one year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparison where relevant.
The given line graph illustrates the changes in the rate of sales of Gold in Dubai in 2002.
Overall
, it is obvious that the most inadequate month was March and the worst was July.
At the beginning of the year, the amounts
of Dirhams Fix the agreement mistake
amount
were
200 Correct subject-verb agreement
was
millions
which increased until March. The biggest totals of Dirhams were exactly 350 Change to singular
million
millions
in the month of March. Change to singular
million
Nevertheless
, in April the quantity
of sales started to significantly decrease and the numbers dropped above 150 Change the quantifier
number
millions
.
Change to singular
million
Furthermore
, the money hovered between June and September. After the particular descended, the totals rosed up from September and remained stable.Submitted by palvdori on
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