Today, many people do not know their neighbours in lrge cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?

Nowadays, many citizens do not have social contact with their next-door friends in a large metropolis. The reason for

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is that many

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are leading hectic lifestyles which can be tackled by gathering some traditional

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together. The root cause of the issue is that we are having bustling lives in big cities. Each citizen today is busy with their daily life; they go to work to earn money to pay for living equipment. But it is not all

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when working, some

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will get stress or even depression

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the amount of work they have or the budgets they have to spend each month.

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, it makes

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when going home just want to relax, unwind and not commute with their

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at all. It is quite true in Vietnam, that many

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, especially the twentieth who live in flats, are less likely to know their next-door friends because of stress. Another factor is that

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nowadays

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a mobile phones

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so much that they do not care about the

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around them. As we are in the revolutionary era, every

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have to change to catch up with the changes.

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, some

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a negative side because they rely

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much on technology or are even addicted to it,

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, citizens are losing their bonds with their

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to time. Looking at Berlin in Germany,

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here are always using phones to surf the internet, read magazines or news and do not care much about their next-door friends.

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can be solved by celebrating the traditional

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together at the community living house. The city's government have to organize some national

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and encourage the

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to join in to have fun.

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, citizens can

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hold an event like a birthday or wedding anniversary and share the happiness with other

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.

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, it helps to strengthen bonds with families, which is good because when a family is having a

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, they can ask for help easier. Take an example in the US, annually, there are many

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as Halloween, and Easter Egg they decorate their house just to fit in with the atmosphere and wait for the children to come to play. In conclusion, city

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nowadays lack

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content with their

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the fact that they have to care for their living. Having more

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together is the solution to

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