In some countries, there is not enough respect for elderly people. What are the causes of this? Suggest some solutions.
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lives
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for
people
because human bing
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regret
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regrets
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much.
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To sum up
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economic
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situation
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develop
teacnology
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technology
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are changed
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change
our culture
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my opinion, that will Capitalize word
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