The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.
The given maps illustrate the layout of an industrial
are
at Correct your spelling
area
Norbiton
in the present-day
and how it will be developed in the future. Correct your spelling
present day
Overall
, there will be immense developments and rearrangements in the site, such
as Correct article usage
the construct
construct
Replace the word
construction
more
residential completed with many facilities.
In Change preposition
of more
nowdays
Correct the word
nowadays
condition
, Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
theres
is a Correct your spelling
there
river
running east-west across the Norbiton
industral
area with the farmland on the north of the Correct your spelling
industrial
river
and the town is
on the west end of the industrial area. Unnecessary verb
apply
Likewise
, to the river
, there is one
road that running
east-west through the industrial field, and Change the form of the verb
runs
one
side of the road leading to the roundabout surrounded
by three Add a missing verb
is surrounded
factories
. In addition
, the roundabout also
has one
side that fullfiled
with many Wrong verb form
is filled
factories
.
In the future, all the factories
will be demolished and switched with several residentials
and amenities nearby. It Correct your spelling
residential
is appeared
in the layout that the Change to the active voice
appears
has appeared
river
location remains unchanged, except fot
the T-road that will Correct your spelling
for
be build
above the Change the verb form
be built
river
and its
is leading to the new Correct pronoun usage
it
redisential
beside the farmland. The roundabout will Correct your spelling
residential
also
have one
more side that functioned as an
access to the Remove the article
apply
resdientials
. Correct your spelling
residents
Furthermore
, in a planned future development, the Norbiton
industrial
will be installed little roundabout to the south of the current Capitalize word
Industrial
one
, and later there
will shops constructed Correct pronoun usage
a
on
its northwest and medical centre on the southeast. Change preposition
apply
Meanwhile
the Add a comma
Meanwhile,
factories
which once filled the east of the Norbiton
indsutrial
will be Correct your spelling
industrial
clear
up and replaced by residentials with facilities nearby it, Wrong verb form
cleared
such
as playground and school.Submitted by baitynuris191 on
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