One of your friends has asked you to be a partner in a new business. Write a letter to reply to your friend's business offer. In your letter - give your opinion of your frien's business idea - tell him/her whether or not you have decided to accept the offer - and explain yor reasons for this decision.

Dear Ali, İ writing to you about your new business and answer your offer. First of all, I want to thank you for you believe me that I can do the jab. You wrote to me about you want to open a new cafe in our village.
, we have two cafes and our village is so small. In, my opinion, the new cafe cannot work because the two cafeteria owners are so successful in their job and they have good relationships with the local people.
, I cannot believe that the new cafeteria can earn money in the village. if you want to open
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coffee shop, I can help you if you have financial problems or find a few staff. İ can barrow to you some money for opening the coffee shop. What you want I can help you.
On the other hand
, I will move to another country as you know. that's why I do not want to start a new jab. Unfortunately, I cannot join the work. Thank you for your kind offer and write to me for the solution if you open the bistro , please. Your best friend, Hasan
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task response
Address the business offer more directly and express a clear opinion about your friend's business idea.
coherence cohesion
Organize the letter into more coherent paragraphs and improve the use of cohesive devices such as conjunctions and transitional phrases.
lexical resource
Expand your vocabulary and use more formal and appropriate language for a business letter.
grammatical range
Pay more attention to sentence structure and grammar, including verb tenses and word forms.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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