Some believe that new science related to criminal forensics should be used to look at old cases. To what extent do you agree or disagre
It is thought by many people that science these days could be used to investigate criminology cases that have not been solved in the past times. I strongly believe that the improvement of technology and science can help to uncover new evidence and shed
lights
on old cases, Fix the agreement mistake
light
although
there is a possibility of finding nothing due to
a long period of time.
On the one hand, there were many unsolved crimes that have been closed because of lack of evidence, however
the advanced technology and the novelist scientific methods could potentially unlock new theories that support the truths of an incident. As an Add a comma
however,
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example
a
famous kidnapping case from months ago, Change preposition
in a
forensic
team was able to track down the kidnappers and the child’s location based on IP Correct article usage
a forensic
adresses
. Correct your spelling
addresses
Consequently
, this
approach persuade
victim’s rights and could Change the verb form
persuades
also
gain society’s trusts
in the justice system.
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trust
On the other hand
, re-opening an old case not only it is time-consuming but also
no
guarantee of finding Add a missing verb
has no
a valid evidence
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valid evidence
a piece of valid evidence
a shred of valid evidence
due to
the fragilinity
of the Correct your spelling
fragility
evidences
. For Change the wording
evidence
pieces of evidence
shreds of evidence
examples
, fingerprints could be easily removed by rainfalls, so even developed machines could hardly Fix the agreement mistake
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recognized
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recognise
it
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them
Instead
, Government
should focus on investing the budget Correct article usage
the Government
on
safety facilities Change preposition
in
such
as CCTVs in public in order to provide a peaceful environment and reduce crime rates for
the future.
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To sum up
, it is necessary to investigate past crimes with the help of modern technologies to provide justice for those innocent people, even though it requires a long time and might be chances of resulting nothing.Submitted by dharyuschen12 on
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