The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house). The second chart show the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The horizon chart gives information about the proportion of males and females doing household chores and the average
time
to do housework.
In general, both genders allocated most of their time
to cooking, while
the opposite was true for house repairs. In addition
, cooking and cleaning were two tasks that were performed by the largest percentage of both men
and women
.
In detail, over 80% of females spent time
cooking compared to 60% of men
. Similarly
, while
60% of women
spent time
cleaning, the figure for men
stood at around 40%. On the other hand
, a slightly larger proportion of men
were involved in pet care at over 20%, while
this
figure for house repairs was twice that of women
at 18%.
In terms of time
spent to perform
these tasks, Change the verb form
performing
women
allocated 80% of their time
on
cooking, followed by the figure for cleaning and pet care was 68% and 20% respectively. The Change preposition
to
time
that men
spent on the same task was slightly lower, at 60% for cooking, over 40% for cleaning and 20% for pet care. House repairs were witnessed under 20% of time
that Add an article
the time
men
spent on, which is higher than that of women
by 15%.Submitted by phongnguyenthanh630 on
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