In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent
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, technologies
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continuously developed in terms of transportation, including
cars
, buses and
truck
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. It is predicted that these vehicles will be automatic and passengers will be the main group who
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these.
This
essay will examine why the drawbacks outweigh the benefits in the following paragraphs. Human-drive vehicles in the future will be
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driverless and these have many disadvantages. First of all,
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automatic transport can undergo accidents when the system has a problem. When
cars
crash,
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can affect
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human by destroying their bodies,
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in the leg.
Secondly
,
people
whose job is a driver may lose their occupation.
As a result
, they need to find a new job to make them survive and gain profit again.
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occupation is not simple as they need to find
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new skills which
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a lot of
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.
Lastly
, the
car
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, buses and
truck
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may send the passengers
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a
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wrong place
due to
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errors and un-updated maps.
People
may lose
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time
and cannot travel to the destination on
time
.
Thus
,
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driverless
cars
have many drawbacks that can affect
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of
people
.
However
, unhuman-drive transport has
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benefits in terms of privacy and convenience.
People
will feel saver to
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especially women because it has no human who
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or
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our body which is now a problem in society.
Additionally
, it gives convenience to
people
since it
simple
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to
use
by just getting
in to
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cars
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and waiting until it reaches
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.
In contrast
, these might affect the elderly because they do not understand how to
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.
To conclude
,
although
driverless vehicles gain benefits, including privacy and simple
use
, they have drawbacks of accidents, occupation
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and
time
waste so
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clearly
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stronger than
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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