The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The
two
maps display how road
access to a city hospital changed between 2007 and 2010.
Overall
, there were not many changes made, except two
new roundabouts, a new car park, and the replacement of the bus
stops by
a Change preposition
with
bus
station.
Surrounding the hospital was a ring road
, which was connected to City Road
by Hospital Road
. By 2010, two
roundabouts had been added, at the junctions of Hospital Road
with the ring road
and with City Road
respectively.
There was a car park for staff and the public on the southeast side of the ring road
in 2007. However
, by 2010, it had become a staff-only car park, and a new public one had been built on the east side of the ring road
.
The bus
stops at
Change preposition
on
two
sides of Hospital Road
were replaced by a large bus
station, which had direct access to the two
roundabouts.Submitted by baitynuris191 on
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