The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The
two
maps display how Use synonyms
road
access to a city hospital changed between 2007 and 2010.
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Overall
, there were not many changes made, except Linking Words
two
new roundabouts, a new car park, and the replacement of the Use synonyms
bus
stops Use synonyms
by
a Change preposition
with
bus
station.
Surrounding the hospital was a ring Use synonyms
road
, which was connected to City Use synonyms
Road
by Hospital Use synonyms
Road
. By 2010, Use synonyms
two
roundabouts had been added, at the junctions of Hospital Use synonyms
Road
with the ring Use synonyms
road
and with City Use synonyms
Road
respectively.
There was a car park for staff and the public on the southeast side of the ring Use synonyms
road
in 2007. Use synonyms
However
, by 2010, it had become a staff-only car park, and a new public one had been built on the east side of the ring Linking Words
road
.
The Use synonyms
bus
stops Use synonyms
at
Change preposition
on
two
sides of Hospital Use synonyms
Road
were replaced by a large Use synonyms
bus
station, which had direct access to the Use synonyms
two
roundabouts.Use synonyms
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