The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The
two
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maps display how
road
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access to a city hospital changed between 2007 and 2010.
Overall
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, there were not many changes made, except
two
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new roundabouts, a new car park, and the replacement of the
bus
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stops
by
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with
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a
bus
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station. Surrounding the hospital was a ring
road
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, which was connected to City
Road
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by Hospital
Road
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. By 2010,
two
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roundabouts had been added, at the junctions of Hospital
Road
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with the ring
road
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and with City
Road
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respectively. There was a car park for staff and the public on the southeast side of the ring
road
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in 2007.
However
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, by 2010, it had become a staff-only car park, and a new public one had been built on the east side of the ring
road
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. The
bus
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stops
at
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on
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two
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sides of Hospital
Road
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were replaced by a large
bus
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station, which had direct access to the
two
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roundabouts.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words two, road, bus with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • road access
  • city hospital
  • traffic flow
  • public transport facilities
  • intersection
  • roundabout
  • car park
  • dedicated
  • modifications
  • congestion
  • accessibility
  • hospital entrance
  • parking areas
  • main features
  • signage
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