The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given maps illustrate the layout of
Correct article usage
the islip
islip
Change the capitalization
Islip
town
centre
in present-day and how it will be developed in the future. Overall
, there will be immense improvements, and the town
centre
will be undergone
so much change, the most significant of which will be the transformation of the countryside and expansion of the main Wrong verb form
undergo
road
.
Today, there is a main road
running throogh
west-east of the Correct your spelling
through
town
centre
with shops at the middle alongside of
it. Remove the preposition
apply
In addition
, the main road
has two side
, which first Change to a plural noun
sides
is leading
to the school southwest of the Wrong verb form
leads
town
centre
, and the other is leading
to the Wrong verb form
leads
park
in the southeast. There are also
several residential located in the middle of the Islip town
centre
.
In the future, there will be dual
carriageway established Correct article usage
a dual
surronding
the Correct your spelling
surrounding
town
centre
. The location of the school, park
and housing remain unchange
in the future, unless there will be some part of the Correct your spelling
unchanged
park
cleared up therefore
leaving so much space for the new residents located beside it. Morover
, the main Correct your spelling
Moreover
road
will be demolished and turned into Correct article usage
a pedestrians
pedestrians
way only. Fix the agreement mistake
pedestrian
Furthermore
, the countryside and shops north of the countryside will become shopping centre
Fix the agreement mistake
centres
complited
with public facilities Correct your spelling
completed
complete
such
as car
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a car
park
at the east of shopping
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the shopping
centre
and bus
station nearby. Correct article usage
a bus
Lastly
, the new hosuing
will be Correct your spelling
housing
also
added to the end of the side of the dual carriageway.Submitted by baitynuris191 on
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