The bar chart below illustrates five industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029.

The bar chart below illustrates five industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029.
The graph shows the proportion of five sectors in terms of the economy from 2009 to 2029 in Brazil.
Overall
, finance has the highest proportion of all industries, the
figure
also
increased steadily. There is an opposite trend in the
figure
for manufacturing and tourism. The remaining two sectors both rose and
then
will decline to the beginning
figure
. The
figure
for finance is over 30% in all periods, starting at around 31% and is likely to climb to 42%.
By contrast
, the proportion of manufacturing decreased and will continue to decline from 21% to 5%.
Similarly
, a downward trend was
also
seen in the
figure
for tourism, which fell from 26% in 2009 to 21% in 2019 and will maintain
this
level until 2029. Food processing and oil, coal and gas have the same trend. With regard to the former, the first decade witnessed a growth in the percentage of the economy, rising from around 11% to the peak(21%) and will go back to 11% in the next decade. The
figure
for the
last
industry began at 26%, growing to 31% in 2019, and will slide to 26% in 2029.
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  • percentage share
  • economic growth
  • industry forecast
  • notable growth
  • decline
  • steady growth
  • trend
  • significant increase
  • economic landscape
  • industry sector
  • projected growth
  • consumer preferences
  • technological advancements
  • industrial transformation
  • mature industry
  • economic policies
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