Some countries achieve international sports by building specialized facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some cities achieve their presence in international
sports
by constructing specialized Use synonyms
facilities
to train top athletes, but others provide Use synonyms
facilities
that are open to everyone. These actions spread debate between proponents and opponents, each of them holding divergent opinions on Use synonyms
this
situation.
Some argue that having Linking Words
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sport
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sports
facilities
specialized Use synonyms
on
top athletes is a bad development for Change preposition
in
the
society. Correct article usage
apply
This
can impact the common citizen by creating Linking Words
him
difficulties in finding recreational Correct pronoun usage
apply
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sport
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sports
facilities
, which can lead to a more sedentary lifestyle and a worse state of well-being on the Use synonyms
citizen
part. Change noun form
citizen's
This
approach can be considered by some as a neglect Linking Words
in
the broader population’s right Change preposition
of
at
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to
a
recreational Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
sports
and fitness. A good example of the negative impact of Use synonyms
Linking Words
this
actions is Texas. Texas has one of the most obese Correct determiner usage
these
population
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populations
of
the world, because the Change preposition
in
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sport
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sports
centers
are usually oriented to competitive contestants and healthier food is mostly given to these competitors and not to the normal citizens.
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centres
On the contrary
, concentrating resources on elite sportsmen Linking Words
is
considered by others as a positive development. Supporting competitive Change the verb form
are
sports
usually consists of Use synonyms
high quality
equipment, Add a hyphen
high-quality
proper
environment, Correct article usage
a proper
strict
schedule and Add an article
a strict
world class
coaches. By taking Add a hyphen
world-class
Linking Words
this
actions and following Correct determiner usage
these
USA
and China's example, better sportsmen will rise up and excel on the global leaderboard.
Correct article usage
the USA
To sum up
, the decision between building Linking Words
athletes oriented
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athletes-oriented
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sport
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sports
centers
or providing inclusive Change the spelling
centres
sports
Use synonyms
facilities
is a complex one with valid arguments on both sides. Use synonyms
While
investing in elite training Linking Words
centers
may provide exceptional results in international competitions, it is essential to balance these efforts by ensuring that Change the spelling
centres
sports
Use synonyms
facilities
are accessible to everyone.Use synonyms
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