The graph gives information about the percentage of the population if four different Asian countries living in cities between 1970 and 2020 with additional predictions for 2030 and 2040.
The provided line graph delineates the fluctuations
of
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in
total
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the total
population
in four cities
in
70 years.
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over
Overall
, the most population
was allocated to Philippines
in 1970, Correct article usage
the Philippines
while
it will overtake by
Indonesia and Malaysia towards the end of the survey. Change preposition
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Moreover
, all cities
have upward trends in the rate of population
.
Philippines
ranked first among other Correct article usage
The Philippines
cities
and was 10 times more than Thailand
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Thailand's
population
in 1970. Philippines’
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The Philippines’
population
rose significantly in 1990 a little less than 50%, while
it was responsible for the
half in 2010. It was followed by a marked growth in 2020 and it will continue to a moderate rise in 2040 (almost 55%). It is seen a slight rise in the Correct article usage
apply
population
of Thailand more than twice as high as its level in 1970 (about 45% in 2040).
According to
the data, in 1970, Indonesia and Malaysia stood at almost 13% and 30% population
in cities
respectively. Both of them have a steady increase in their people’s number, it is predicted that the number of citizens will peak at 60% for Indonesia and 80% for Malaysia in 2040. The latter city will rank first in the population
of the public in 2040.Submitted by negin.nematbakhsh on
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