Some people say that students should take a gap year after high school to work. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?

It is argued that nowadays many people say that
students
should take a
gap
year
before entering
university
to gain more
experience
.From my perspective, I completely agree that
student
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students
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should take a
year
off after graduating before entering
university
. On the one hand, it is true that there will be many benefits if
students
take a
gap
year
. An explanation for
this
is that they can take time to make a suitable decision about what major and what job to study.
For example
, many
student
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students
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after high school are hurry to enroll in
university
without prior planning, so after studying for a
while
, they feel they are not suitable so they change majors and
wasting
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waste
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a lot of time.
Beside
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that,
take
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taking
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a
gap
year
can
enrichs
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enrich
enriches
their life
experience
.
In other words
,
take
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taking
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a
year
off gives
students
a great opportunity to learn new things outside that they are not taught in school.To illustrate they can meet people and learn about their culture, make friends to expand their relationships or
exploring
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explore
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more diverse cultures when
traveling
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travelling
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or working, they can enrich themselves with
knowledge
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the knowledge
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they didn’t know previously so their future
career
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will be enhanced.
On the other hand
, it should be acknowledged that taking a
gap
year
creates problems. Specifically, they will suffer from peer pressure and feel left behind.
It
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is because
that
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apply
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students
who enter school later have difficulty adjusting to the
university
environment and most jobs for
gap
year
takers are not valuable (because they have no
experience
).
For example
, statistics found
26
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that 26
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% of
students
who take a
gap
year
never enter tertiary education.
As a result
,these
students
have no interest in learning and cannot catch up with their classmates,
moreover
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moreover,
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they fail to gain useful
experience
and waste one
year
. In conclusion,
take
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taking
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a
gap
year
has
it’s
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its
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advantages and
disvantages
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disadvantages
. If they determine
and
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an
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effort they will have more favourable.
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