The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarized the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The pictures
demonstrates
the recent layout of Change the verb form
demonstrate
floor
at Add an article
the floor
central
library and Add an article
the central
also
shows
how it used to be 20 years ago.
It's clear thatCorrect subject-verb agreement
show
,
the whole plan of the floor was changed during Remove the comma
apply
this
20 year
period, and every section moved to another part. Add a hyphen
20-year
Also
the tables and chairs are already disappeared.
Add a comma
Also,
According to
the diagram, a cafe and self-service machines are added to the right side near the entrance where it used to be the inquiry desk. However
, an information desk is replaced next to the machines. In addition
, adult
fiction Correct article usage
the adult
books
section is
moved to the opposite side and it Wrong verb form
has been
had
become smaller by now. Wrong verb form
has
Moreover
, all reference books
are placed at the previous site of fiction books
.
Besides
all that mentioned, children's
book part Correct article usage
the children's
is
changed and it is Wrong verb form
has been
lecture
room now. Correct article usage
a lecture
Although
, a wider spot is provided for children to participate Correct word choice
However
at
Change preposition
in
a storytelling events
Correct the article-noun agreement
a storytelling event
storytelling events
equiped
with convenient sofas and read fiction Correct your spelling
equipped
books
which is in the other side that
is used to be a room for computer games. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Additionally
, computer
room is located Add an article
the computer
in
the left hand after entering the library through Change preposition
on
entrance
.Add an article
the entrance
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 2 times.
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