The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarized the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

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the recent layout of

floor

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the floor

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central

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the central

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library and

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shows

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how it used to be 20 years ago. It's clear that

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the whole plan of the floor was changed during

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20 year

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period, and every section moved to another part.

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Also

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the tables and chairs are already disappeared.

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the diagram, a cafe and self-service machines are added to the right side near the entrance where it used to be the inquiry desk.

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, an information desk is replaced next to the machines.

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adult

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fiction

books

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section

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moved to the opposite side and it

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become smaller by now.

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, all reference

books

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are placed at the previous site of fiction

books

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all that mentioned,

children's

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the children's

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book part

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changed and it is

lecture

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room now.

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Although

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, a wider spot is provided for children to participate

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a storytelling events

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a storytelling event

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equiped

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equipped

with convenient sofas and read fiction

books

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which is in the other side

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that

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is used to be a room for computer games.

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computer

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the computer

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room is located

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the left hand after entering the library through

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words books with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

189 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Floor plan
Public library
Layout
Bookshelves
Reading areas
Digitalization
Technological advancement
User needs
Space allocation
Facilities
Evolution
Community
Renovation
Adaptation
Accessibility
Multimedia
Archives
Reference section
Study carrels
Children's area

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