The charts below give information about the people use public library and the main reasons to visit in BritIain in 1991 and 2000
The pie chart below shows
about
Change preposition
apply
the
information that people who visited the library Correct article usage
apply
several
types of reasons in Britain Change preposition
for several
in
1991 Change preposition
from
in
2000.
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to
Overall
,it can seen that,those individuals which
contain borrowed or returned Correct pronoun usage
who
book
majority of the people and Fix the agreement mistake
books
other
less sach as Fix the agreement mistake
others
study
ratio was low in the library.
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the study
To begin
with,in 1991 the community prefer
to Wrong verb form
preferred
borrowed
a book mostly Change the verb
borrow
get
that at 65 Wrong verb form
got
percent
and the reason Change the spelling
per cent
of obtain
information and for Change preposition
for obtaining
study
was equally only 10% Add an article
the study
in addition
,that person who read newspaper
and magazine Fix the agreement mistake
newspapers
was
15 % it was more than Unnecessary verb
apply
other
two categories.
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the other
Furthermore
,in 2000 the average person of borrowed and returned book
was low as Fix the agreement mistake
books
campare
Correct your spelling
compared
1991
it was 55 %. The study ratio decreased Change preposition
to 1991
roughly
2 % and Change preposition
by roughly
Correct article usage
the obtain
obtain
information increased now it was 20 % Wrong verb form
obtained
moreover
, reading was
Unnecessary verb
apply
also
deminish
as Correct your spelling
decreased
campare
previous year Correct your spelling
compared
just
5%.Change preposition
by just
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