In some countries, younger people are neglecting their right to vote. What problems does this cause and what are some of the possible solutions?

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The right to
vote
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is being neglected by young
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in some nations.
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essay will first discuss that
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irresponsible behavior can hamper
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a country's
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development and they can lose their national identity card
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problem
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can be overcome by the enforcement of strict laws and by creating awareness among
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public about the real impact of
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. One
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associated with neglecting the right to
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is that
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will suffer. It can make a win for the undeserving political party by making a difference in the number of votes, which can increase some other problems
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as inflation and unemployment.
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, they would have no one to blame, if
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problem
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is that their voting card or other national identity cards will be cancelled by
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authorities. In India,
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, when the citizens of their state do not
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, the
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sends them an infringement letter
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the cancellation notice of other important documents. An effective solution to mitigate
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problem
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is that
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government
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the government
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should enforce strict laws for showing ignorance towards voting.
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would encourage
people
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to understand the importance of their responsibility towards
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the country
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country
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the country
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and
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make them liable to face the consequences of not following the rules.
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government
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the government
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should organize camps all around the year to aware or educate
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the public
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about the significant impacts of not voting. When
people
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know the deeper effects of their irresponsible actions, they will probably stop doing
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Malaysia as an example, where political parties start doing rallies before
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the election
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, which is why, no Malaysian
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misses
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the opportunity to
vote
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. In conclusion, the major problems that
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are that it resists
country's
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the country's
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development and loss of national identity document by
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, and the solutions are enacting stringent laws and
create
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awareness among
people
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • democratic process
  • political instability
  • skewed representation
  • governance
  • erosion
  • civic education
  • alienation
  • policy-making
  • accessible
  • incentives
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