The diagram below shows the proposed changes to an office building. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The diagram below shows the proposed changes to an office building.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

 

Write at least 150 words
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Illustrated in the maps are
existing
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structure and planned renovation of an office complex.
Overall
, extensive changes are proposed particularly regarding the re-development of the grass areas at either
side
of the building. ​ The grass area, currently located on the right of the building, will be changed to a meeting area and the WCs are proposed to be moved from its present location to the back right of the new complex. On the opposite
side
, the grass will be converted into a seating area.
Additionally
, another significant change is the relocation of the entrance from the right
side
to the
center
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of the building. ​ In the central interior, the four small offices at the front will be
remodeled
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into two larger ones located on either
side
of the entrance.
Furthermore
, the canteen and kitchen at the rear are planned to be renovated into additional offices and a coffee machine will be installed next to the WCs
while
the only room to remain unchanged will be the storeroom. ​
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Vocabulary: Replace the words side with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the sixth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • layout
  • modernize
  • efficiency
  • utilize
  • facilities
  • proposed
  • key changes
  • existing
  • highlight
  • zones
  • implications
  • flow of movement
  • improved productivity
  • work environment
  • implementation
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