The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.

The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.
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The given graphs illustrate the
nutrition
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facts of
two
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different dinners, namely medium baked
potato
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and
macaroni
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.
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,
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two
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the two
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dishes both consist of 5 different nutritional components with carbohydrates as the
nutrition
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with the biggest
percentage
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and other nutrients as the smallest
percentage
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. With
macaroni
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, carbohydrates
is
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are
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the main
nutrition
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that makes up more than half of the
nutrition
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that existed
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existed
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exists
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. The same can be observed in
medium
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a medium
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baked
potato
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,
however
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,
this
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dish has a significantly smaller amount of carbohydrates at 35%. In both meals, saturated fat and other nutrients contribute around 25%
the
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of the
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nutrition
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provided.
While
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the
percentage
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of fat in baked
potato
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is only 10%,
this
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nutrient makes up more than
one fifth
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one-fifth
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the
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of the
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nutrition
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in
macaroni
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. Baked
potato
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also
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has a larger amount of other nutrients at 15%,
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, the
percentage
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of
this
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component is only 5% in
macaroni
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. Protein is the third largest nutritional component of the
two
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meals with 25% in baked
potato
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and 11% in
macaroni
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. Another
nutrition
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of the
two
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dishes is glucose at 15% with
potato
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and 11% with
macaroni
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.
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words nutrition, two, potato, macaroni, percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • nutritional consistency
  • carbohydrates
  • proteins
  • fats
  • vitamins
  • minerals
  • fiber
  • proportion
  • component
  • pie graph
  • comparison
  • significant
  • balance
  • healthy
  • dietary choices
  • implications
  • absent
  • presence
  • macro-nutrients
  • micro-nutrients
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