The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.
The given graphs illustrate the
nutrition
facts of Use synonyms
two
different dinners, namely medium baked Use synonyms
potato
and Use synonyms
macaroni
.
Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
Use synonyms
two
dishes both consist of 5 different nutritional components with carbohydrates as the Correct article usage
the two
nutrition
with the biggest Use synonyms
percentage
and other nutrients as the smallest Use synonyms
percentage
.
With Use synonyms
macaroni
, carbohydrates Use synonyms
is
the main Change the verb form
are
nutrition
that makes up more than half of the Use synonyms
nutrition
Use synonyms
Correct pronoun usage
that existed
existed
. The same can be observed in Wrong verb form
exists
medium
baked Add an article
a medium
potato
, Use synonyms
however
, Linking Words
this
dish has a significantly smaller amount of carbohydrates at 35%.
In both meals, saturated fat and other nutrients contribute around 25% Linking Words
the
Change preposition
of the
nutrition
provided. Use synonyms
While
the Linking Words
percentage
of fat in baked Use synonyms
potato
is only 10%, Use synonyms
this
nutrient makes up more than Linking Words
one fifth
Add a hyphen
one-fifth
the
Change preposition
of the
nutrition
in Use synonyms
macaroni
. Baked Use synonyms
potato
Use synonyms
also
has a larger amount of other nutrients at 15%, Linking Words
In contrast
, the Linking Words
percentage
of Use synonyms
this
component is only 5% in Linking Words
macaroni
.
Protein is the third largest nutritional component of the Use synonyms
two
meals with 25% in baked Use synonyms
potato
and 11% in Use synonyms
macaroni
. Another Use synonyms
nutrition
of the Use synonyms
two
dishes is glucose at 15% with Use synonyms
potato
and 11% with Use synonyms
macaroni
.Use synonyms
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words nutrition, two, potato, macaroni, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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