The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The given diagrams illustrate the schematic process and tools needed to produce
cement
, and concrete production for building purposes that use Use synonyms
cement
as one of its Use synonyms
materials
. Use synonyms
Overall
, there are five stages to make Linking Words
cement
, starting from the crushing of two raw Use synonyms
materials
and ending with packing the Use synonyms
cement
, Use synonyms
while
there is only one stage to make concrete.
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Firstly
, Linking Words
cement
production starts by crushing limestone and clay in a crusher, which results in a powder that goes through the next machine, the mixer. After the mixing, Use synonyms
the next step is
putting the powder into a rotating heater, with heat coming from the fire. The half-ready powder Linking Words
then
undergoes the Linking Words
last
process, grinding, in a grinder to make it more refined and have an even size . Linking Words
Lastly
, the finished Linking Words
cement
is packed into bags.
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Next,
the concrete is produced using Linking Words
cement
which makes up 15% of its whole material proportion. It is mixed with 10% of water, 25% of sand, and 50% of gravel as the most dominant . All Use synonyms
materials
are put into a big machine called a concrete mixer that works continuously until all Use synonyms
materials
are evenly mixed and ready for building purposes.Use synonyms
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