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The graph below shows consumers’ average annual expenditure on cell phones, national and international fixed-line services in America between 2001 and 2010.

The graph below shows consumers’ average annual expenditure on cell phones, national and international fixed-line services in America between 2001 and 2010.
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The graph depicts information about the amount of consumer cell phone records nationally or internationally and the final-year expenditure in America over a nine-year period from 2001 to 2010. After analysis, it is clearly seen that in 2001, mobile services, starting from the bottom at 200
dollars
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, went on increasing, hitting the same point where they met with international
line
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service
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 at about 300
dollars
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.
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, it inclined rapidly to its highest rate and met national
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service
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, making up 500
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 after a four-year period (2006), after having a slight drop before it showed the same upward trend.
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, the number
went on decreasing
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 for the national
line
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service
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 from 700
dollars
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 to 500
dollars
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 for the first five
years
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,
where
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when
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 it touched phone
service
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,
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 it showed the same downward trend for the
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 five
years
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 between 2006 and 2010, reaching almost 400
dollars
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.
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, for the international
line
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service
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, the
service
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 rose from about 250
dollars
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 to 300
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 for the first three
years
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; after that, it remained steady throughout the
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 and did not change its trend from 2003 to 2010.
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, it can be vividly manifested that the graphs showed some fluctuation;
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, cell phone services gradually enhanced and reached their maximum point,
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 that of national
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service
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 went on decreasing and hitting its lowest point.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words dollars, line, service, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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