The graph below shows consumers’ average annual expenditure on cell phones, national and international fixed-line services in America between 2001 and 2010.
The graph depicts information about the amount of consumer cell phone records nationally or internationally and the final-year expenditure in America over a nine-year period from 2001 to 2010.
After analysis, it is clearly seen that in 2001, mobile services, starting from the bottom at 200
dollars
, went on increasing, hitting the same point where they met with international line
service
at about 300 dollars
. Similarly
, it inclined rapidly to its highest rate and met national line
service
, making up 500 dollars
after a four-year period (2006), after having a slight drop before it showed the same upward trend. Moreover
, the number went on decreasing
for the national Wrong verb form
decreased
line
service
from 700 dollars
to 500 dollars
for the first five years
, where
it touched phone Correct word choice
when
service
, whereas
it showed the same downward trend for the last
five years
between 2006 and 2010, reaching almost 400 dollars
.
Furthermore
, for the international line
service
, the service
rose from about 250 dollars
to 300 dollars
for the first three years
; after that, it remained steady throughout the years
and did not change its trend from 2003 to 2010.
Overall
, it can be vividly manifested that the graphs showed some fluctuation; however
, cell phone services gradually enhanced and reached their maximum point, while
that of national line
service
went on decreasing and hitting its lowest point.Submitted by abdulahad08600 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words dollars, line, service, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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