The diagram below shows how orange juice is produced.
The flow chart describes how orange-flavoured juices are manufactured.
Overall
, the process has alternative methods of production of carton-stored juices and one method of canned juicing with both processes that begin with harvesting
of fresh fruits.
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the harvesting
Firstly
, the harvested produce is transported in a truck to the factory, where it is thoroughly cleaned to get rid of dirts
and some extraction of liquid takes Change the wording
dirt
specks of dirt
places
which leaves some pulp Fix the agreement mistake
place
that is
therafter
recycled as animal feed and the fresh juice which has two pathways as a drink in a carton or as a canned beverage.
After proper packaging in a durable box, the end product is ready for sale in supermarkets Correct your spelling
thereafter
whereas
the end product of extraction needs proper storage in a refrigerated truck , goes through a process which removes all the fluid and leaves a concentrated product that is
stored in many cans , left in a warehouse and then
can be repackaged after adding water to be sold as juice in paper iin
supermarkets.Correct your spelling
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