The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

#maps #show #area #town #norbiton #future #development #site #summarise #information #features #comparisons

The provided maps illustrated

Change the article

show examples

environmential

Correct your spelling

environmental

plan

consisted

Wrong verb form

consisting

show examples

of the current site and its future development at a specific industrial area in the town of Norbiton.

Overall

,The goal is considered to

redevelopt

Correct your spelling

redevelop

redeveloped

a residential

neightborhood

Correct your spelling

neighbourhood

with more supporting facilities. Currently,

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

several factories

has

Change the verb form

have

show examples

been located along the only roundabout, and both of these industrial facilities will be removed in future. In the south of

this

map, a new small roundabout is located under the main one at the

central

Replace the word

centre

show examples

, the shops and the medical centre are

construced

Correct your spelling

constructed

near to

this

centra

Correct your spelling

central

show examples

place. In the east of

central

Correct article usage

the central

show examples

roundabout, It will be

Change the article

the

show examples

most housing place with a playground in the north

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

and a school

at the end

The more

Correct article usage

show examples

housing

are

Change the verb form

show examples

also

located along the northwest side of the road from the central roundabout. To the northwest of the river,

on the other hand

, the additional housing is to be built near

Change preposition

apply

show examples

the T- intersection which is way linked to the central roundabout by the bridge. In the eastmost of the north housing, A farmland is planned to be located where is directly

opposited

Correct your spelling

opposite

the playground,

sperated

Correct your spelling

separated

operated

by the river.

Submitted by bookcool5 on Tue Nov 14 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

▼

Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

▼

Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.

▼

Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.

▼

Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

▼

Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.

▼

Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

▼

Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

▼

Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.

▼

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

190 words

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

Topic Vocabulary:

industrial area
planned future development
factories
warehouses
railway line
shopping center
residential buildings
college
mixed-use zone
commercial
residential
educational
green spaces
pedestrian walkways
housing
community
retail services
revitalize
quality of life
vibrant
sustainable

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

<4
band
In recent years, women's roles have changed dramatically. What changes have occurred? Do you think these changes are positive or negative
In modren era, female's have mulitpule role to changed reapadly. while these changed are happend becosue of their senstive nature and capabuility to handle mulitpal task at the one time.
4
band
•Countries with a long average working time are more economically successful than those countries which do not have a long working time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
•In Today’s world, every nation is running in a race to prove them selves that they are far better than the other countries. Some believes that working extra hours gives boost to the growth of a nation. However, I am not completely agree with the given statement and will discuss the reasons in the following essay.
5.5
band
In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by international fast foods. Some people believe this exerts a negative effect on both families and societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays, it is becoming common for people to consume fast foods. Some people believe that this trend has a negative impact on both families and societies. However, I firmly agree that replacing traditional food with international can bring a negative impact on families and societies for 2 main reasons.
7.5
band
Some countries have introduced laws to limit working hours for employees. Why are these laws introduced? Do you think they are a positive or negative development?
In this contemporary era, employees are required to work limited hours as some laws are implemented by certain countries due to some drawbacks of working more hours and I view this trend as a positive one. I discuss the reasons why rules have been implemented and prove my side by providing some evidence.
5
band
Some people think that young people electronic and computer games is helpful while the others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There has been an ongoing debate on whether young individuals entertain themselves with online games are beneficial or just a useless act. The writer of this essay argues that entertainment via computers provides many benefits because it aids The intellectual growth of the young and it acts like a refreshment for the mind of the users.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

In recent years, women's roles have changed dramatically. What changes have occurred? Do you think these changes are positive or negative

•Countries with a long average working time are more economically successful than those countries which do not have a long working time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by international fast foods. Some people believe this exerts a negative effect on both families and societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some countries have introduced laws to limit working hours for employees. Why are these laws introduced? Do you think they are a positive or negative development?

Some people think that young people electronic and computer games is helpful while the others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.