The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart below illustrates the distribution of private insurance policies in the world,
while
the table illustrates the distribution of areas in which insurances
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are
used in India, England and Australia.
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overall
share. The other significant feature is that Englands'
population have the largest number of people with Change noun form
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insurances
among the other nations.
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35% of the Correct subject-verb agreement
occupies
overall
share, which is the biggest proportion compared with the others. Life
insurances
has 28% of the total share, which is 3% less than Fix the agreement mistake
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health
insurances
. The Fix the agreement mistake
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6% are insurances
of other types.
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population have Change noun form
England's
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an
insurance, which is mainly distributed in Remove the article
apply
auto
insurances
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insurance
while
health
and life
insurances
have 7.9% and 5.7% respectively. Fix the agreement mistake
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Moreover
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Africa's
Africas'
insurances
are mainly used in Fix the agreement mistake
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health
, with 3.5%, which double
the number of Add a missing verb
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life
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only 0.4% are
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auto
insurances
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health
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall, while".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words insurances, auto, health, life with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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