You are looking for a part-time job at a football club. Write a letter to the manager of the footbal club. Introduce Explain experience andand special skills when do you think you can start
Dear Sir or Madam ,
I trust
this
letter finds you well. My name is Abdugani , and I am reaching out to gather information about the English language courses offered at your institution. I am considering pursuing my studies in English abroad, and your school
has captured my interest.
Firstly
, I would like to know more about your school
, including its reputation, accreditation, and any distinctive features that set it apart. Understanding the ethos of the school
would greatly assist me in making an informed decision.
Regarding accommodation, I am seeking options that provide a conducive environment for focused learning. Could you please provide details about on-campus and off-campus housing options available to international students? Additionally
, I have a preference for [specific details about accommodation preferences, such
as single room, quiet environment, etc.].
Furthermore
, I have some special requests that I hope can be accommodated during my stay. One such
request is related to dietary preferences; I follow a [specific dietary preference or restriction], and I would like to inquire about the availability of suitable meal options either within the school
's facilities or nearby.
I appreciate your time and assistance in providing this
information. If there are any application procedures or forms I should complete, kindly guide me through the necessary steps.
Thank you in advance for your attention to my inquiries. I look forward to the prospect of studying at your esteemed institution.
Your
Sincerely,
Mavlonov Abdug'aniCorrect the word
Yours
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task response
The content of the letter does not match the task prompt. The letter is not addressed to the manager of the football club and does not contain information related to a part-time job at a football club.
greeting closing
The greeting and closing are unrelated to the task, as the letter is not addressed to the manager of the football club.
coherence cohesion
The letter lacks cohesion and does not follow a logical structure. The content jumps between different topics without a clear flow or connection.
lexical resource
The letter contains a mix of inappropriate lexical choices and unrelated content. The vocabulary and language used do not align with the task prompt and are not relevant to the topic of seeking a part-time job at a football club.
grammatical range
The grammatical range is limited, and the letter contains numerous grammatical errors and lack of appropriate sentence structures.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.